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1. __Mentor Poem__ __A Dream Deferred__ By Langsten Hughes What Happens to a dream deferred? Does it dry up like a raisin in the sun? or fester like a sore-- And then run? Doe sit stink like a sore? and then run? or crust and sugar over-- like a syrupy sweet Maybe it just sags like a heavy load or does it explode.

__Analyzation__ end up like its not a big deal || dreams aside who knows what happens to them. Instead of wasting a dream take it, hold it, and make it come true. ||
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 * Line 2 and 3 || Simile || The author means that when you have a dream does it just
 * Entire Poem || Simile || I think that the author is trying say that whenyou put your

__My Poem:__ Forgotten Promise By Olivia Krieger

What happens to you when a promise is forgotten or broken? Will the promiss wait to be fixed or kept? Does the person that was promised forget or does she wait and wait but nothing comes? Does the one who made the promise blow it off, or just not care anymore? Is a promiss important, even in the smallest situation? i can answer that question. yes. small or big never forget**.** i promise**.**

**2.** __Mentor Poem__ __Hey Dog ﻿__ That's how you call your boys. Hey Dog. You want to hoop? Then you and your dogs are throwing the ball around and talking about girls and ballplayers and stuff you're gonna have one day A red car some slamming kicks a shearling coat a pocket full of money a pretty girl a satellite dish and cable on and on and your dogs two college degrees, straight A straight up a phat deal with the Lakers no, the Knicks, no, the Nets

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 * < Lines 2-5 ||< Explaination ||< I think that this is explaining what the title means. ||
 * < Lines 6 and 7 ||< Conversation ||< This is what you and your "dog" your friend talk about when you hang out ||

__My poem:__ __Hey Dude__ by Olivia Krieger I'm so excited! I have something importsnt to say. even though im talking my best girl friend she's still my dude. There's a thing called an O.M.G. moment like: dude!!! oh my god youll never believe... You think about using dudette but you think no, thats to weird. Or you say dude when your, upset. Make it extra long Duuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuddde! hey dude.

3. __Mentor Poem__ __Did I Miss Anything?__ by Tom Wayman

Nothing.When we realizd you weren"t here we sat with our hands folded on our desks  in silence, for the full two hours

Evereything. I gave an exam worth 40 percent of the grade for this term and assigned some reading due today on which I'm about to hand out a quiz worth 50 percent

Nothing. None of the content of this course has value or meaning. Take as many days off as you like any activities we undertake as a class I assure you will not matter either to you or m and are without purpose

Everything. A few minutes after we began last time a shaft of light suddenly descended and an angel or other heavenly being appeared and revealed to us what each woman or man must do to attain divine wisdom in this life and the hereafter This is the last time the class will meet before we disperse to bring the good news to all people on earth

Nothing. when you are not present how could something significant occur?

Everything. Contained in this classroom is a microcosm of human experience assembled for you to query and examine and ponder This is not the only place such an opportunity has been gathered

but it was one place And you weren't here

__Analyzation__ is just becasue you were not here doesn't mean that we waited for you or millions of thing happen you weren't there so we moved on and obviously you missed something. || clear and make his point easier to understand || __﻿__ __My Poem:__ Can You Eat That? By Olivia Krieger
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 * Line 31 and 32 || message || This raps up the end on the poem and i think that the message
 * Entire poem || Hyperbole || I think that the author used exaggeration to make his message more

Yes. I can eat this. I might get hives all over my body and my eyes swell up, but thats ok.

No. I can't eat this. i picked it out for my snake and i eat it everyday but i wont be able to eat it now.

Yes. i can eat this. my throught my swell up and i wont be able to breath and i will probably die but i can eat it.

No. I can't eat it. i bought it so i can go home wihtout lunch and feed this to my fish.

Yes. i can it it, but after can we make a pitstop , to the hospital?

No. I can't eat it. i made this, and brought it to the party myself so that everyone else can eat it and ill just have to sit and watch.

Don't worry about it I'll be fine.

4. Mentor Poem: __Knoxville, Tennessee__ by Nikki Giovanni I always like summer Best you can eat fresh corn Fromm daddy's garden And okra And greens And cabbage And lots of Babeque And buttermilk And home mad ice-cream At the church picnac And listen to Gosple music Outside At the church Homecoming And go to the mountains with Your grandmother And go barefooted And be warm All the time Not only when you go to bed And sleep

__Analyzation:__ of year to which would be summer. || __﻿__ My Poem: Wooden Acres, Camp By Olivia Krieger I always love camp the Best. Going tubing veryday and making arts and crafts and the toy and boating and canoeing and dancing and cheers going to th dance laughing all day making the best of friends bond fires with messy smores crazy times but they are fun to your always glady our there when you have to go home you miss it terribly till the next year comes.
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 * Lines 21-24 || Imagrey || It makes you think of people wearing tanks and shorts and the sun shining ||
 * Entire poem || Discription || Tells you what this girl likes about Knoxville, what she does, and a specific time

5. Mentor poem: __Cynthia in the Snow__ BY Gwndolyn Brooks It SUSHES It hushes The loudness in the road Its Flitter-twitters, And laughs away from me It laughs a lovley Whiteness And whitely,whirs, aways To be Some otherwhere Still as white as milk or shirts So beautiful it hurts

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of the whiteness is beutiful || __﻿__ __my poem:__ __Olivia Among the stars__ By Olivia Krieger It Whispers It twinkles It shnes so brightly Like dimonds In the night sky Beautiful, bright, light She lays on the grass She looks at the amazing dimonds She smiles She closes her eyes but when they open again her dimonds are gone
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 * line 12 || Hyperbole || Its exaggeration to show how much this person thinks all
 * Line 11 || Imagrey || the author put this in to show how its so white and so much white ||

6. __Mentor Poem:__ __Not Afriad__ by Eminem I'm not afraid to take a stand Everybody come take me hand We'll walk this road together, through the storm Whatever weather, cold or warm Just ket you know that, your not alone Holla if you feel that you've been down the same road

And i just can't keep living this way So starting today, I'm breaking ot of this cage I'm standing up, Imma face my demons I'm manning up, imma hold my grounds I've had enough, now I'm so fed up Time to put myself back together right now

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is big or bad obstacle || benn down this same thing once but we cant be afraid and we need to stand of and get through it ||
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 * Lines 3 and 4 || Metaphor || Eminem is saying that he isnt goning to give up anymore even if there
 * Entire Poem / lyrics || lesson || I tink the lesson is We all have problems we need to get through and we have all

__My Poem:__ __Afriad No Longer__ By Olivia Kreger I am afraid no longer i will do this and do it right i will stand up speak loud and be proud no more hidding in the backround standing behind another is not me any longer I am afraid no longer.

7. Mentor poem __The Great Outdoors__ By Britni Hart The great outdoors, The fresh cold air, The smell of wood burning, The sheet joy of friends in company.

I love all these thing.

Looking up at the stars on a clear night To hear an owl hooting at a great hight All of these things are such a good sight.

Look all around you, What can you see? The woods? The pond? The Lake? What?

What are you doing when you see, feel, hear these things?

Camping. That's what you are doing.

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understand things a little better when the author put the five senses ||
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 * Lines 22-24 || The five senses || The author put that in to make you think about what the outdoors are like. it makes you
 * Entire poem || Free verse poem || This author made her own rules. ||

__My Poem:__ __Outdoors__ By Olivia Krieger

Feel the Wind blowing in y hai and the prickley grass on my feet The sun burning on my face

Smell the fresh air, all the plants and flowers and waer from rainall days before

Hear the bugs buzzing and the birds chirping the leavs shuffling in the wind

See many different colors from flowers to fall leaves but over all theres much green The bue sky and the ig yellow sun

so just relax Because out of all of this you get peace.

8. __Mentor Poem:__ __A Friend Like You__ By Jenni Cortes

A friend like you is like no other freind A freind like you is a friend i dont regret meeting A friend like you is like a friend i can't scream at or fight with A friend like you is like having no worries in my life A friend like you is a friend that i dont want to lose A friend like you is like being in comfort all day A friend like you is a friend i always wanted A friend like you is awesomly awesome A friend like you is random and funny A friend like you is a friend that i love to death and i will never let go A friend like you is a friend i can tell all my secrets to  A friend like you.. A friend like you is like the little sister ive always wanted A friend that i can go to to tell them whats wrong A friend like you is like having no dark days because you brighten them up A friend like you is a friend that opens up my eyes and helps me avoid bad things A friend like you is a type of friend that laughs at dumb things i say or do A friend like you is a friend i am proud to call my best friend...

__Analyzation:__ __My Poem:__ __A Sister Like You__ By Olivia Kriegr A sister like you is one that i know for sure loves me A sister like you is one that always shares A sister like you is one that i get inspired by A sister like you is one that will always mak me laugh A sister like you is one that takes good care of me when my parents aren't there A sister like you is one i know i can trust to keep secrets A sister like you is one i can talk to forgood advice A sister like you is one i care about yur oppinion A sister like you is that or only fights would be about something silly like the lyrics to a song A sister like you is on that screams out sigingwith me when were suppose to be doing homework A sister like you is one that i love.
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 * Line 15 || Simile || It means that you dont have dark days as in bad upsetin days because your freind always brightens them up meaning makks your day better or make you smile or laugh. ||
 * Entire Poem || Repetition || Each line starts with A friend like you is... this helps discribe and emphasize how great of a friend this persn is ||